W.A.L.T write a persuasive text
persuasive pet writing
It is unacceptable that people think all kids should have pets 1 they are expensive 2 many kids have allergies 3 lots of kids have anger issues.
Firstly pets are extremely expensive and on top of that they eat a lot of food which is also expensive dogs will also cost a fortune is damage to furniture and carpets from their muddy paws. Don’t get me started on vet bills they are just crazy .
Secondly many kids have allergies, which can make them sick or even be fatal so don’t get a pet without checking if you or your kid have animal allergies. Also more than 10 people die from pet allergies.
Finally some kids have anger issues which can lead to harm for the pet or the kid. Let me explain a dog can get hurt by a kid and then it will strike back leaving the kid in the hospital or the pet in the vet or both, so be careful up to 100 people die from animal attacks each year.
In conclusion not all kids should have pets, but if you do make sure it is the right one.
Thank you for reading my article,
By Archie
Well done for paragraphing your writing Archie. You have some excellent ideas and valid points.
ReplyDeleteNext steps: We are going to work together on capital letters.
Miss Pownall