write a persuasive letter

WALT write a persuasive letter

in our class we have been learning to write a persuasive letter.

Archie Fortnun

Room two

NBC

Friday 28 August 2020

Miss Pownall

Room Two

NBC

Dear Miss Pownall,

I strongly believe that we should have a dog in the class because, It makes you happy to be around dogs, it is relaxing at meditation and even when doing work, and finally it will be a new learning experience and will probably boost us mentally. 

Firstly, dogs make you happy and less stressed. Studies have shown that having a dog can affect the owner´s emotions in a positive way because it lets off a happy hormone in your brain called oxytocin. Many people find that having a dog helps depression by an ever growing rate. I find that in my own life being around dogs mentally calms me down if I am stressed and makes me happy.

Secondly, when dogs are around most people relax .When dogs are around kids and adults can relax more and complete more work because it could be a reward to have time with the dog. When I have meditation with a dog or any animal I am more calm and relaxed. Studies have shown that meditating with a dog can decrease anxiety and help both of your mental wellbeing. 

Finally, it will be  mentally boosting for us,  because it will be a new learning experience for us to learn with a dog plus it will help us focus in and listen because we know no dog likes really loud noises. Studies have shown Pets mainly dogs help depression and loneliness and encourage you to exercise and  be more playful.

In conclusion, having a dog in the class will help the whole class in many ways by making us happier, more relaxed and it will help us with our learning a lot.

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W.A.L.T list what makes us feel in God's presence.
my list contains

• The forest because I here nature  
• A sunset because the colors remind me of god
• Finally a mountain view because when I am on top I feel closer to God 

When/where do you feel closer to god?

my marble game

W.A.L.T what are common examples of physical force

In class we are looking at marbles and ways ways we can use them , we also made our own marble game here are the rules of mine. 

   

Have you ever played a marble game?

paul's missionary journey

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paul one of jesus most favoured disciples went on three journeys to spread the word of god here is my map showing them.

persuasive pet writing

W.A.L.T write a persuasive text 

persuasive pet writing

It is unacceptable that people think all kids should have pets 1 they are expensive 2 many kids have allergies 3 lots of kids have anger issues.

Firstly pets are extremely expensive and on  top of that they eat a lot of food which is also expensive dogs will also cost a fortune is damage to furniture and carpets from their muddy paws. Don’t get me started on vet bills they are just crazy .

Secondly many kids have allergies, which can make them sick or even be fatal so don’t get a pet without checking if you or your kid have animal allergies. Also more than 10 people die from pet allergies.

Finally some kids have anger issues which can lead to harm for the pet or the kid. Let me explain a dog can get hurt by a kid and then it will strike back leaving the kid in the hospital or the pet in the vet or both, so be careful up to 100 people die from animal attacks each year.

In conclusion not all kids should have pets, but if you do make sure it is the right one.

Thank you for reading my article,

By Archie