Monday, 15 June 2020

The day the crayons quit

W.A.L.T write a persuasive letter.
In my class we watched the day the crayons quit and then we wrote a letter for why our crayons would be mad. I hope you enjoy

ARCHIE!

 Black crayon here. I'm gonna make your life a misery. Stop using me to colour in happy things. Colour in something evil, or just snap me. It is very hard to be angry and mad if you keep using me to colour in puppies and bunnies, try a dark cemetery sometime.
Your very destructive enemy,
Black crayon.

Here is the video

4 comments:

  1. Excellent work Archie. The angle that you have taken for this letter is very original. Well done, Miss Pownall.

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  3. This is reall cool archie

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  4. this is really cool

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